[Grading] Abel and Cain meet a magical girl

https://evolutioncity.forumotion.com/t357p25-abel-and-cain-meet-a-magical-girl#3378

Characters being graded
Abel/Cain
Kari

Very sorry for the delay. Abel going for point 2 and Kari going for point 1.

Abel: Point
Kari: Point

Abel, you need to pay attention to sentence structure. There is a very distinct lack of periods or commas. I notice your "sentences" are actually composed up of normally three actual sentences. Be careful and break those up in the future. It is disruptive to the reader as well as difficult to follow one point from another.

With that out of the way, post your upgrades and await approval.

Ice Replicas

Kari can create functional weapons out of her ice (to exclude guns) the weapon follow the same rules as her ice powers. Weapons are Dense enough to not break when clashing normal human weapons. (ice powers scale)

Claws-Cains aura sharpens his fingers to a point they do not grow any longer but they cut about the same as a combat knife

Both approved. Add them to your plotters.