Grading Request: Shadows and Spiders
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Re: Grading Request: Shadows and Spiders
Alright, first point for Penumbra and third point for Arachne. So the length was pretty nice. Looked like almost two pages. Not a whole lot of combat, but it was still there. Plenty of power usage on both parts. And a new recruit for the fast growing Supervillain team.
Natalya Polzin: Point
Robin Shade: Point
So Penumbra, its pretty easy to get the first point, so you had this one in the bag. Arachne, you get this for still being in the lower tier, using an abundance of power, and advancing your story. Also, gratz on the new underling, and welcome to the big leagues! So, with that out of the way, tell me your new power up.
Natalya Polzin: Point
Robin Shade: Point
So Penumbra, its pretty easy to get the first point, so you had this one in the bag. Arachne, you get this for still being in the lower tier, using an abundance of power, and advancing your story. Also, gratz on the new underling, and welcome to the big leagues! So, with that out of the way, tell me your new power up.
V.Carnage- Posts : 308
Join date : 2016-07-05
Re: Grading Request: Shadows and Spiders
Arachna's webbing gains strength, now capable of holding a standard human being suspended above the ground by a thread. Additionally, spun webs and threads are capable of ensnaring a being of standard human strength and weight and leaving them incapable of escape without a cutting instrument or something of greater force.
Arachna- Posts : 109
Join date : 2016-07-16
Re: Grading Request: Shadows and Spiders
Okay, thinking I'll remove the "When teleporting, he arrives facing the same direction and in the same position as when he departed." Flaw from my ability.
Penumbra- Posts : 25
Join date : 2016-07-21
Re: Grading Request: Shadows and Spiders
Looking good. Both approved. Go ahead and add the upgrades to your plotters.
V.Carnage- Posts : 308
Join date : 2016-07-05
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