Grading Request: Hunting Grounds

Thread to be graded: "Hunting Grounds" (https://evolutioncity.forumotion.com/t113-hunting-grounds#922)

People to be graded:
Charon
NOT Sinew (only monsters were present, was GMing)

Okay, let's get down to business.  About average length.  Minor action on Charon's part barring firing a gun and running.  No use of ability whatsoever.  However, did sustain a serious injury.  Going for your fourth point, that means;

Charon: No Point

You are going for your fourth point already which means it is going to require a lot more than this to get a point.  Moving on, make sure to make note of this.  Especially with your growing powers (both super and gang power included), I'd suggest trying to pull off something bigger than you already have, as from now on you aren't going to be gaining points from doing some of the things you have already done.  

Also, as a side note, having sustained a fairly serious injury from this thread, I would suggest making a note of Charon recovering from it and it being a temporary weak spot for the next thread or two, for better story flow and realism.  This, however, is mostly just a suggestion, but I feel it would add to the continuous flow of the story better, which is another large factor in your grading from now on.  Therefore, if you do this, while it may not directly get you a point, it should give it a little boost to your story which should help you in the future.