Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

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Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

Post by Drago on Fri Aug 05, 2016 3:47 am



General Information

Name: Malachi (pronounced mala + kee) Fauney
Alias: Drago
Age: 16
Gender/Sex: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Height: 5'2" or 1.5m
Weight: 123 lbs or 55.8 kg


Behavioral Information

Alignment: Good, Neutral, Nice
Personality: Shy and lonely for most of his life, Malachi tries to be nice and as outgoing as he can in efforts to make new friends. His efforts tend to leave him embarrassed and feeling awkward, but he persists despite his tendencies towards drifting off back to more solitary activities. Since his powers manifested, he's grown more confident, but it's a long process.

Likes: Video games, Fantasy books and movies, smoked salmon

Dislikes: Crowds, being alone, bullies

Background
Malachi's parents divorced early in his life - so early that he doesn't remember his father at all - and so he grew up alone with his mother. It was a loving relationship, but for most of his life she was kept tied up with her work so they rarely had time together. As a result, he spent most of his free time at home reading, and later playing video games when he was old enough to use the computer.

Throughout elementary school he escaped attention of the meaner kids at school, and would tend towards sinking into a book even during class whenever he'd caught up, or could sneak it by the teachers attention. In middleschool however, the practice drew more attention - from students if not the teachers - and he began to be bullied. It was never an extreme amount and he got practiced at finding places where he wouldn't be found and could read or play on his gameboy in peace, but he left him even more isolated from the other kids his age. By the time he entered high school, he had no friends to speak of.

When he developed his powers and was transferred to Alabaster High, he was determined to change that, enrolling in the SAFE program in an effort to befriend some of the other potential heroes.

Superhuman Information

Power Holder?: Yes

Dragon Spirit: Malachi can cause a single dragon to appear out of apparently thin air within arms reach (~3 feet). He cannot control the Dragon, it acts on its own along the lines and intelligence of a pet cat or dog. It can understand instructions, but like a pet, doesn't always listen. It will attack someone if it, or Malachi are directly harmed.

The dragon can be no further than thirty feet away from him, or it will vanish. Within that range, the dragon can fly (up to 25mph), its scales can withstand .09 Caliber handgun bullets (no rifle equivalent), and the dragon itself can breathe a campfire’s worth of flames out of its mouth. Malachi can also cause the dragon to vanish intentionally, though he cannot dismiss and summon the dragon in the same turn. Discounting the extra length of the tail and wings, the dragon can be up to the size of a Border Collie, though it can be made smaller.


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Re: Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

Post by Admin on Sat Aug 06, 2016 3:36 pm

Power Breakdown Time!

Dragon Spirit
Pros
Summons Dragon Spirit (Major)
Dragon can tank .09 caliber bullets and below in damage. (Major)
Dragon can fly (speed unspecified). (Major)
Dragon can breathe fire (Major)
Controllable (Minor)

Cons
Powers in relation to the Dragon are not owned by the User (Major)
Limited Range from Summoner (Major)
Reduced amounts. (Major)
Summon/Dismiss Delay (Minor)

You need one more major flaw or to remove one major ability from the dragon.

The following amounts should be specified due to reduced amount.

Scales: .09 Caliber handgun, no rifle equivalent.
Flight: 25 mph
Fire Breath: Campfire's worth (already there; good!)

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Re: Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

Post by Drago on Fri Aug 12, 2016 2:41 am

Does not being able to control it while doing anything else work as a major flaw?
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Re: Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

Post by Admin on Fri Aug 12, 2016 11:03 am

Not being able to control it at all would be a major flaw. Unable to control while doing anything else is a minor flaw.

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Re: Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

Post by Drago on Mon Aug 15, 2016 8:58 pm

Dragon Spirit: Malachi can cause a single dragon to appear out of apparently thin air within arms reach (~3 feet). He cannot control the Dragon, it acts on its own along the lines and intelligence of a pet cat or dog. It can understand instructions, but like a pet, doesn't always listen. It will attack someone if it, or Malachi are directly harmed.

The dragon can be no further than thirty feet away from him, or it will vanish. Within that range, the dragon can fly (up to 25mph), its scales can withstand .09 Caliber handgun bullets (no rifle equivalent), and the dragon itself can breathe a campfire’s worth of flames out of its mouth. Malachi can also cause the dragon to vanish intentionally, though he cannot dismiss and summon the dragon in the same turn. Discounting the extra length of the tail and wings, the dragon can be up to the size of a Border Collie, though it can be made smaller.

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Would this be an acceptable version? Not too sure what else to do for downsides.
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Re: Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

Post by Admin on Tue Aug 16, 2016 2:50 pm

Yes. Also noting that starting older than 14/15 does not give you benefits over 14/15 year old characters in terms of powers.

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Re: Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

Post by Drago on Thu Aug 18, 2016 3:49 am

Alright, updated it to that! And yeah, that's fine, just wanted to play a slightly older character.
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Re: Malachi Fauney - Drago - Hero

Post by Admin on Thu Aug 18, 2016 11:22 am

Alright. With all those edits in place, I've looked over the remainder of the app, and see no issues. This character is...

APPROVED!

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