Grade Thread: Mean Streets and Neat Tricks

[Watson]

https://evolutioncity.forumotion.com/t250-mean-streets-and-neat-tricks

People that need to be graded.


Donovan Rowan

[V.Carnage]

Looks like we have a simple confrontation in the shopping district.

Donovan: Power Opportunity!

Given that you requested to be graded I assume that means you are now trying to get a power or a weapon. Respond with what you want and await approval.

[Watson]

Dimensional Storage: Donovan is capable of storing things into what some might call hammerspace, making the object seemingly disappear and is able to pull them out at will. Though he is only able to store up to 100 pounds at any given time. Additionally, Donovan is unable to store any living thing, or anything being held by another person. He is still burdened by the weight of the objects he is carrying, and thus will not be able to carry more weight than he would physically be able to carry. Donovan has a limited range on how far he can effect objects. Currently only objects within a five feet, mostly by targeting it in his mind.He is also able to simply stuff things into hammerspace by grabbing them, simply stuffing his hand with the object into his storage. Much like one would do any other container. Additionally, he is not able to store an object that is moving. Donovan will regularly keep a baseball bat in his storage and will often use it to fight if necessary. There’s nothing particularly noteworthy about the bat, and it takes up a five pounds of his storage capacity already.

[V.Carnage]

Power Breakdown

Pros:
Pocket Dimension (Major)
Storage of 25 lbs (Minor)
Baseball Bat (Freebie, because its not technically a weapon so I'll consider it a prop)

Cons:
Can't store living things (Minor)
Can't store anything held by someone (Minor)
Burdened by weight (Major)
Can't store moving objects (Minor)
Can't store an object while moving (Major)

Well looks like its rather underpowered for now. However I'd also like a specification of distance as well as his method of sending something to his "hammerspace". Does he touch it? does he wave his hand? etc. once we get that established we will be able to balance it.

[Watson]

alright I added range and method

[V.Carnage]

New Power Breakdown

Pros:
Pocket Dimension (Major)
Storage of 25 lbs (Minor)
Range of 5 feet (Minor)
Baseball Bat (Freebie, because its not technically a weapon so I'll consider it a prop)

Cons:
Can't store living things (Minor)
Can't store anything held by someone (Minor)
Burdened by weight (Major)
Can't store moving objects (Minor)
Can't store an object while moving (Major)
Requires Finger Snapping (Removed via our discussion)


With that we can get to picking and choosing. So right now Pros has a total of 2 Major (2Minor = 1Major). So if you get your cons in any combination down to 2 Major then you are good. If you don't want to get rid of any Cons you can add more to Pros. Or if you really want to I suppose I could allow you to keep it as is and you start off a bit underpowered and with more things to buy off. Your choice.

[Watson]

Alright removed the inability to move and increased his storage capacity

[V.Carnage]

New New Power Breakdown

Pros:
Pocket Dimension (Major)
Storage of 100 lbs (Major)
Range of 5 feet (Minor)
Baseball Bat (Freebie, because its not technically a weapon so I'll consider it a prop)

Cons:
Can't store living things (Minor)
Can't store anything held by someone (Minor)
Burdened by weight (Major)
Can't store moving objects (Minor)

Alright, everything checks out.  

Approved.

Go ahead and add that to your Plotter.

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