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Grading Request: Family is Family

Post by Palm Perdu on Tue Jul 19, 2016 9:24 pm

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Re: Grading Request: Family is Family

Post by Admin on Wed Jul 20, 2016 7:16 pm

I've looked over this thread. It's bare bones, but it's worth the first point. Unfortunately for Agni and Sam, this thread was completed and put up for grading before their previous thread was finished being graded.

It's a thusly it will count as if being during their other thread and is not viable to grade for them.

Palm: Point!
Agni: No Point
Sam: No Point

Palm, you may spend your point here. You must register it in this thread, please give it specifics and amounts if they are applicable.

When it is approved you may add it to your Power Tracker on you Plotter.

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Re: Grading Request: Family is Family

Post by Palm Perdu on Wed Jul 20, 2016 7:34 pm

Old Version:

Unseen Friend: Palm's power manifested into that of an invisible arm connected to her a few inches above the end of her tailbone. Unseen Friend manifested itself a month or so ago. It is rendered invisible even to technology such as thermal vision and cameras. It can stretch out to a length of five feet and expand it's human-like size till its palm is one foot long in diameter.

Despite being a manifestation of Palm's powers she has no control over it. It has a mind of it's own as it refuses to listen to any simple commands Palm gives it. It has times when things catch its attention and becomes distracted by said object. It also has a tendency to drag Palm around whether in battle or not. When fighting its and Palm's movement are uncoordinated to a fault. It will force Palm's body to move when it wants to attack. Which makes it drag Palm's body around like a ragdoll.

It has the durability of a normal arm and when attacked with enough pressure it will break. When the arm is attacked or smashed to pieces Palm can only feel the sensation of said pain like it was her own. However, the invisible arm can lift up to 250 pounds, making it remarkably stronger than Palm.

New Version:

Unseen Friend: Palm's power manifested into that of an invisible arm connected to her a few inches above the end of her tailbone. Unseen Friend manifested itself a month or so ago. It is rendered invisible even to technology such as thermal vision and cameras. It can stretch out to a length of ten feet and expand it's human-like size till its palm is two feet long in diameter.

Unlike before when it displayed intelligence like that of a beast it is now capable of thinking like a human. It can think about decisions and even take Palm's opinions into consideration instead of wildly lashing out at people when they show hostile intentions. It speaks to Palm through a one-way telepathic link but she has no access to such link and has to speak verbally for it to hear her.

It has the durability of a normal arm and when attacked with enough pressure it will break. When the arm is attacked or smashed to pieces Palm can only feel the sensation of said pain like it was her own. However, the invisible arm can lift up to 500 pounds, making it remarkably stronger than any human.

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[b]Unseen Friend[/b]: Palm's power manifested into that of an invisible arm connected to her a few inches above the end of her tailbone. Unseen Friend manifested itself a month or so ago. It is rendered invisible even to technology such as thermal vision and cameras. It can stretch out to a length of ten feet and expand it's human-like size till its palm is two feet long in diameter.

Unlike before when it displayed intelligence like that of a beast it is now capable of thinking like a human. It can think about decisions and even take Palm's opinions into consideration instead of wildly lashing out at people when they show hostile intentions. It speaks to Palm through a one-way telepathic link but she has no access to such link and has to speak verbally for it to hear her.

It has the durability of a normal arm and when attacked with enough pressure it will break. When the arm is attacked or smashed to pieces Palm can only feel the sensation of said pain like it was her own. However, the invisible arm can lift up to 500 pounds, making it remarkably stronger than any human.
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Re: Grading Request: Family is Family

Post by Admin on Wed Jul 20, 2016 7:52 pm

Approved.

Mark it as follows in the plotter:

First Point: Sapience - The Arm is now capable of complex thoughts and understands human speech. It can communicate with a one-way mental link with Palm.

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