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Post by Emerl on Mon May 13, 2019 8:34 pm

Link of thread: http://evolutioncity.forumotion.com/t341-new-super-on-the-loose?nid=1#3221

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Post by V.Carnage on Wed May 15, 2019 5:19 am

Bug Girl going for her first point.

Emerl: Point!

Post your upgrade and await approval. If you don't have a plotter already then you should make one as that is where you will add your upgrades.
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Post by Emerl on Wed May 15, 2019 10:07 am

Ant Mimicry:  Emerl has gain an affiliation for ants and thus is able to adapt supernatural traits of the creatures. See below for actual power.

Dorylus Sensory: Emerl's biology is more ant causing her to grow antenna out of her head. These antenna are permanent and take over as her primary sense for smell, granting the girl Enhance smell and removing said function from her nose. Emerl can pick up on the tiniest amounts of smell from air, water, or underground if she knows what she is looking for and has smelled it before but her senses are naturally tuned for picking out food and pheromones. As such it takes a bit of focus to find non food related scents. If something is not within range of her antenna, she can also follow scent trails. Emerl's antennas are always active and Emerl cannot stop smelling. (doubles Dorlyus Strength)


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Post by V.Carnage on Thu May 16, 2019 2:59 pm

While for upgrades you don't need any drawbacks, my sources say you desire to have them here.  I suppose I can allow that.  Just a couple things.  
1. The "-1 to focus" descriptor sounds like a D&D term and doesn't really mean anything here, but I will just assume you are using that purely to get your point across and not listing logistics.  
2. Most of these drawbacks seem like normal consequences of the power.  For instance,  sending out pheromones is by default detectable by others who can sense pheromones and does not truly count as a Pro or a Con.  The "Simple Messages" part just seems like a specification as well.  
3.  I'm going to have you decide between Enhanced Smell, and Pheromone emission this point.  you can get the other next point.  If you choose Enhanced Smell I will allow you to be able to pick up pheromones or you can save that addition for when you emit pheromones.  You will still get the bonus to your strength with this point.

Post your altered version of the upgrade and I will make another call.
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Post by Emerl on Thu May 16, 2019 11:19 pm

and finished...

made the app much simpler and i removed the silliness from it. I also made a choice.
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Post by V.Carnage on Fri May 17, 2019 1:30 am

Approved. Go ahead and add it to your plotter.
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