Aku Mashinzou
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Aku Mashinzou
General Information
Name: Aku Mashinzou
Alias: Oni
Age: 25
Gender/Sex: Female/Female
Sexuality: Bisexual polyromantic (she likes to date multiple people but only gets truly intimate with one at a time)
Height: 6'5” or about 2 meters
Weight: 200 lbs or 91 kg
Behavioral Information
Alignment: Evil ;; Chaotic ;; Neutral
Personality: Aku is somewhat sadistic, but not otherwise too horrible of a pers--er, demon. She enjoys breaking things-- other than herself, though including those in her way-- and isn't dumb, but is not very smart or wise either. While she is a villain, she does have her own code of honor, though if whoever is paying her gives her an order she will only challenge it once. She will take money from practically anybody with the means and will obey their orders almost all the time-- the only exception being what was mentioned above. She dislikes people that try and make her seem like an idiot-- again, she's not very smart, but sufficiently so.
Likes: Destruction, getting paid, fair one-on-one fights, alcohol
Dislikes: Being broke, people who try to make her look stupid, breaking herself
Background
Aku had a bad childhood, raised by an alcoholic single mother a little ways from Ruby City, abandoned by a father she never knew. She joined a gang fairly early in life, though left soon after as her powers began to develop and she began physically changing. She grew horns and her skin turned blood red, leading to ridicule early on. She also grew taller and more toned, leading to her looking older. However, her strength developed as well, and soon she was able to stand up and beat down anybody in her way. She soon got hired as a bodyguard in various instances for various high-ranking gang members. She continues to do such even to this day, and is now well-respected and fairly well-known. She now lives in Ruby City, just because she gets more jobs there.Superhuman Information
Power Holder?: Yes
Super Strength: Aku has vast strength, able to lift up to 250 pounds; however, it is permanent and she has no control over how much strength she uses at any given moment. She is also vulnerable to the effects such lifting would have on a normal person’s body, e.g. could shatter her arm after punching a brick wall. She also has an altered appearance due to her power, making her appear somewhat demonic.
Last edited by Aku Mashinzou on Tue Dec 18, 2018 1:47 am; edited 1 time in total
Aku Mashinzou- Posts : 3
Join date : 2018-12-17
Age : 23
Re: Aku Mashinzou
So now we've got an Oni lady huh? Let's get down to it.
My, she is quite tall. I'll have to be careful with her.
Background checks out.
Power Breakdown:
Pros:
Super Strength (??? Discussed below)
Cons:
Monstrous Appearance (Minor)
Limited fine control (Minor)
For the mos part it seems balanced, I just have a couple things. First off for the strength, based on your cons you can have a pro equal to a Major. Super Strength (Major) is 250 lbs. You can bump up your 200 to 250. I would also like you to specify i the power description that her appearance is a result of her power. Finally, also note that the limited control over her strength will become a bigger and bigger problem as she levels up.
Once you have things updated, just respond and I'll finish grading.
My, she is quite tall. I'll have to be careful with her.
Background checks out.
Power Breakdown:
Pros:
Super Strength (??? Discussed below)
Cons:
Monstrous Appearance (Minor)
Limited fine control (Minor)
For the mos part it seems balanced, I just have a couple things. First off for the strength, based on your cons you can have a pro equal to a Major. Super Strength (Major) is 250 lbs. You can bump up your 200 to 250. I would also like you to specify i the power description that her appearance is a result of her power. Finally, also note that the limited control over her strength will become a bigger and bigger problem as she levels up.
Once you have things updated, just respond and I'll finish grading.
V.Carnage- Posts : 308
Join date : 2016-07-05
Re: Aku Mashinzou
Edited! Also, the limited control is very purposeful
Aku Mashinzou- Posts : 3
Join date : 2018-12-17
Age : 23
Re: Aku Mashinzou
Alright, everything is in order.
Approved
V.Carnage- Posts : 308
Join date : 2016-07-05
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