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Post by JollyLabyrinth Sat Aug 20, 2016 10:39 pm

Thread to be graded: https://evolutioncity.forumotion.com/t122p25-mission-hostile#1063

Characters to be graded:
Sam Guivine
Charon
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Post by V.Carnage Mon Aug 22, 2016 3:00 pm

Okay, sorry for the wait, but here it is.  Before getting into this I would like to establish that if you feel there is ever some unjust bias in my grading, feel free to PM me your reasoning.  I simply want to avoid that strange bias/feeling I mentioned before.  Anyway, without further adieu;

The thread was a decent length; a bit shorter than I was expecting, but still passable.  Pretty good action with a high difficulty setting.  It was made to look like Sam and Charon were actually struggling throughout the entirety.  However, a criticism is all semblance of having a rough time disappeared as soon as the opponent dropped aside from a brief mention of Sams arm.  There seemed to be no worry and little mention of after battle injury from then on.  Continuing on, Charon's injury carried over from a previous thread adds to a continuing flow of story that also added an extra layer of challenge for him, which he incorporated well, and earns him some extra brownie points.  Also a good showing of both characters growing arsenals.  Additionally, there was a bit of character growth in the form of loyalty for Charon and a member of his gang.  It was effective but wasn't anything we haven't seen before from him, so not many extra "points" on that.  Now, to not keep you waiting any longer;

Sam Guivine: Point
Charon: Point

Make sure to spend your points here as you already know, and to wait for approval before adding them to your plotter.  Also, additional notes!

Resulting World Effects:
There is a news program the following morning covering the robbery of a jewelry store in North Sapphire and the murder of an SF hero.  Because the security systems failed to get shut down, all cameras were still active.  A camera by the back entrance in the ally caught the majority of the fight.  The camera quality was not the best, but it caught slightly blurry images of Sam with his lower face mostly covered.  It caught Charon's replacement mask (which was not specified in appearance, so I shall remind you to do so in the future) and his unmasked face.  Images have yet to be released to the public, but the majority of SF officials and heroes have been made aware and are on the lookout.  Charon's regular mask was not caught and he shall not be recognized for this while wearing it.  No names have at this time been put to the images.  Sam's blood found on the body of the SF hero is now on police and SF file under the case but also has not been put to a name at this time. Good luck!
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Post by Charon Mon Aug 22, 2016 3:23 pm

Knife Master: Charon gains the use of fighting proficiently with a variety of knives, allowing him a knowledge base of knife fighting and having superior skill than anyone untrained. Chaorn specifically uses a Karambit.
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Post by JollyLabyrinth Mon Aug 22, 2016 6:11 pm

Stopping power: Allows Sam to harden the blood inside of him to create internal body armor to deaden the effects of weapons (blunt melee and .9mm caliber bullets) and significantly reduce staggering effects.
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Post by V.Carnage Mon Aug 22, 2016 6:20 pm

Both are approved. Charon, make sure to specify that yours is a new power.
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